Thursday, April 10, 2008

Relationships

Here's a poem about relationships ( lower right). It has a nice ring to it, don't you think?

3 comments:

She She said...

Awww I like it, a bit sing song like but nice.

Juan said...

didn't know that you liked poems..(are those the books you're always reading? lol) anyway, here's one I wrote a while back...


The last petal put to words what your eyes always said
Now I feel the cool autumn breeze pass between us,
why doesn't your hand fit in mine anymore?
Oh, the pain as your fingertips slowly recede
They inch away from mine and with every pore my heart bleeds.
Is there another rose somewhere on this hill?...
I guess the magic 8 ball was wrong when we asked it that question.
It didn't see the water balloons burst or words erase
But to be completely honest, neither did I.
I trace my hand on the cheek where you last kissed me.
It's hard but I'll let the horizon embrace you as you walk away.

MalmsteenRulez! said...

Wow....it's so pure, sincere and innocent. I wrote one too a few years ago. But I was angry with my then-bf so it was like sad/upset/angry poem.